The art was nice, the animation was okay, but it needs color. Also, needs the ability to not auto-replay.
It's actually pretty well animated, the problem is that it needs sound, otherwise people will deem it as a simple pivot animation, not a .swf. Without sound, it's sure to get blammed. Hopefully it lives :D
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