I see you've finally uploaded your song, but why did you rename it "Trial and Error"?
Anyway, not too bad, but the rock part needs to be adjusted slightly, so it won't block out the background sound. (Sorry, I have no other word to use. Sound seems like the only one. D:)
I named it that because, well, it's a trial. With lots of errors.
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